While Hitler publicly - and even to a certain degree towards his intimate entourage of military men, ministers, women, a few artists and the close colleagues- was ultimately the unapproachable and inscrutable Führer, in my presence he always acted as perhaps he secretly preferred it should be.
逗号后面的句子，翻译成“但在我面前，他私下里表现得更像是他真实的自己。”这样翻译可以吗？